I love summer so much!!!!! I scan see my friends every day and I can go to the beach and I'm free!!! Well actually I can see my friends every day at school, too, but there you don't have enough time to talk! Anyway, I have an excerpt from a story I'm writing, since Leah said she loves them so much:
Wait first BTW if you look at like the very first few posts on here there are excerpts from the same story but a different part of the story. Anyway, here it is:
Ferra hurried inside. Even from the vast distance from the door to the throne, he could see a limp body on the floor. He ran to him, a scream escaping his lips. Tears slowly gathered in his eyes, and his throat ached as a lump grew.
Ferra threw himself to Brokk's side, sobbing. As he leaned against the otherwise cold body, he felt a strange warmth against Brokk's hand. He flipped it over, revealing the green member stone of Frale. Remembering Brokk's words at their first meeting, Ferra spied Brokk's palm, with was blackened and burned.
Now Ferra understood how Brokk had died. He swallowed hard and stood as if to prepare to face the inevitable truth: Brokk was a traitor.
You'd have to read what I've already written to really get that, even though I pretty much just ruined the whole story (which isn't finished). Right now its about 18 pages long, and I want to finish and try to get it published. Anyway, go outside and enjoy your summer!!! Bye!!!
rAiSa
8 comments:
wow, i could like never write any thing like that.......
btw, you better ask your parents about saturday cuz i really want to go!!!!!!!
oh my gosh that is so amazing!! i haven't written somthing as long as 18 pages ever either. i hav to read it sometime!
AMAZING
FANTASTIC
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GOOD
INSPIRING
EXCELLENT
OUTSTANDING
BRILLIANT
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SMASHING
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i agree with leah. btw how r peoples summers?
this summer is so frickin boring!!!!!!! jk
that was good!!! but some people(u know who u are) need to stop freaking out so much!!!seriously!!
cya,
JeNn
awww... you're just jealous! jk. well... um, i guess i'm flattered! thank you. but that actually was a part of the story that was not that well written. i want to try to get the whole book published when i'm done with it! and actually its 20 pages now. or 21. anyway, summer is rockin awesome!!! but i miss you all! we need to get together sometime!!!!!!1
whatever!:P how touching you miss me even though i saw u yesterday!lol
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