Monday, April 7, 2008

The Rest of Us

I don't know why I chose that title, I just liked it. Normally I don't like when people's titles have nothin to do with the post, because the you're all excited to see this awesome post, and it ends up being dumb (no offense). So sorry about that. I have decided to exerpt, which I have not done in FOREVER!!!

Though the school was diverse, full of many different and interesting people, all the students seemed to revolve around just three girls. These girls were flawless in every way. Their skin was free of blemishes, all tanned beautifully. Their hair was shiny and bobbed up and down with each step. Their eyelashes were dark and thick, their lips were full and pink, and their clothes were of high quality and very expensive.
But the girls' eyes didn't sparkle with every mischievous smile. They didn't huddle, hiding urgent whispers, then laughing unnaturally loud so as to impress and mystify others. They didn't have snappy comebacks or funny jokes. They didn't even gossip.
These girls' personalities were so blank, it was as if corpses were walking around. There were never any laughs or smiles radiating from them. In fact, they barely talked. With their strange personalities and perfect looks, these girls were almost inhuman.
There were another three girls roaming the halls of the school, and they too were almost alien. But they were just the opposite. Dry bumps and blemishes covered their ghostly pale skin. Their hair was a colorless tangle of grease and knots. They had thin lips and eyelashes, and their clothes were the same as their hair: messy and free of color.
The girls' personalities, however, were the most beautiful part of them. Their laughs always echoed throughout the school, and their smiles lit the halls. Happiness emanated from their sparkling eyes, and they were all friendly and easy to talk to.
Everyone else in the school was invisible, floating through the walls as if they weren't even there. What went on between each group of girls was a mystery to even the teachers.

Once again that was a really bad ending but I gotta go now so BYE.

RAISA!!! :)

5 comments:

jennjeanne said...

thats not bad its good!! its a little creepy like you shiver a little after you read it(i know that sounds weird but you know what i mean) any way...

syl,
J

Laugh Attack said...

That was good!!!!

12 purple roses said...

a shiver... now you made me get a shiver

Anonymous said...

Raisa, that was so good, I swear I am going to steal that! That was so intriguing, and now I want to know more, so you should write more! Please! Do! If you do and I miss it, tell me!! Amazing!!!! (I told you that you were going to be a writer someday!!!)
Guess who this is...
Hint- I told you that I tried to read your blog, but I accidently went to www.ilovetodrum.com! Who is it..??????

12 purple roses said...

oh! oh! pick me! i know! it's Leah!!! am i right? am i right? thank you but that really is not very good. and as for writing more... i can't think of anything else for that!