and so on and so forth

IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (for the time being) i'm free!!!!! (well, at least until Monday, when i'll have to drag my poor self out of bed ssssssssssooooooooooooooooo early and trudged tiredly into the freezing cold, where i will sit and wait to reach my dreaded destination. but let's not think about that now.) anyway, despite my newfound period of freedom, i will stick to my promise of writing more, so as not to disappoint all you who are reading my fabulous story (yah right!)

god, what is with me??? i am writing all weird and formal and such!!! and dramatic!!!!!!! well, i suppose (what's up with that?) that i talk like this; all dramatic and overeggerative and all, but still, i mean i NEVER write like this!!! well, whatever. so, i will start with the last sentence of the most recent exerpt:

A bolt of electricity shot from the Queen's blackened fingertips, and the man crumpled to the floor, lifeless.
"Bloka!" the Queen called. A frail-looking man scurried into the room. His eyes flickered nervously to the corpse on the ground, but then he answered his Queen dutifully,
"What is it, Queen Elissa?" He tried his luck, smiling meekly at her, but his grin faded as it met her cold stare.
"Dispose of the vermin. You may do it as you wish, but I never want to hear of him again."
Bloka nodded and bent to pick up the body. His glance landed on the thin chain around Saar's neck that matched his own.
"His binding...?" he asked the Queen.
She looked quizzically at him, the answered, "Destroy it."


PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know that jenjeanne can't possibly be the only person in the WORLD who has read this, so unless you have no idea what this means (in which case you couldn't have read that anyway, which is like those bumper stickers that say "Honk if you're illiterate."), COMMENT OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (of course it's not like i can actually DO anything to you on account of a bunch of reasons, but whatever!!!)