IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
have you ever experienced that weird feeling at the end of a long period of time? like it went by sssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo fast... like you can't believe a year is already over? and then while the year is acutlly going by, it seems like forever! and then since it was going by fast and slow at the same time, you are forced to conclude that it was going by just regular, and the whole comment was pointless in the first place!!!!!! well, i am feeling like that right now! like the week has been like that! but now i am so glad that it is a weekend! only tonight my dad's aunt is coming over and so we are going shopping at an authentic grocery store like where my dad is from and then after that we are going out to eat but that is stupid because we have to pick up my dad from work and my aunt and we are leaving soon and it is sssssssssooooooooo dumb because i really don't want to go and it is wasting my beautiful friday!!! anyway, here's a SHORT exerpt:
I crept quietly through the dark house. The dusty floor was rotting in some places, so i had to squint to watch where i was going. suddenly i heard the low groan of a door opening. the night had been still, so it couldn't have been the wind. I leaped silently to an old bureau and crouched behind it. My breathing seemed to fill the silence with noisy racket, but if i held my breath i would have to let it out, and that would be even louder.
suddenly a dark figure entered the room. the tall shadow looked around cautiosly, making sure that no one was around. suddenly a switch clicked, and the single ray of a warm glow illuminated a few dust particles in the air. i huddled into a ball, hiding my face. with a crash, the figure kicked the bureau aside. being so old, it crumbled, and my hiding place was revealed. i screamed and junped up. with a push, i ran past the stranger, but it grabbed onto my arm. i twisted around, but the already tight grip stiffened, and i yelped in pain. the flashlight fell to the floor and rolled away. a raspy whisper blew a hoarse, stale message into my ear: "come with me or die". i felt the cold metal of a gun, and when the stranger dragged me away, i knew i couldn't resist.
ok, maybe not so short, but whatever i g2g now.
3 comments:
once again i love it!! it just sounds cool.
You're amazing!! i totally agree with jenjeanne.the words just seem to flow. as my english teacher would say:bravo child, bravo.
thanks. I LOVE TO WRITE!!! i haven't written that much in a long time. and your english teacher sounds like the kind of person that i would like. but she sounds a little weird.
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