I love to read blogs and make blogs and post comments on blogs and everything!!! It is SOOO fun... yes i know i have an obsession but oh well!!!!! Ok, i am going to write an excerpt from a story/book that i am writing. Please post a comment about it.
A girl, about twelve, sat alone in a dark corner. Her dark chesnut hair hung in her face. She was staring into the distance, a lost look in her emerald green eyes. A look of hopelessness, of fear. The girl stood. She was wearing white knee-length shorts and a green tank top.
The girl uttered a single, inaudible word. Her voice was hoarse and raspy, and she sounded desperate. Tears glistened in her eyes, quivering in place before cascading down her face. She ran quickly and silently away, following the twisting road into the horizon and out of sight.
The End (of the exerpt)
4 comments:
This is me, kayla. to post a comment just click on the title of the entry and then click "post a comment" then type who you are and type your comment!!!
hi! It's Jen-jeanne! whats the story called? its good like all your wriing. :) BTW Tibby "Kayla" and everyone else come to my blog sweetooth2710. Thanx
syl,
Jen-jeanne
i dont know what 2 write!!!! any ideas? u should write more since u know wut 2 write.
ttfn,
Jen-jeanne
p.s. pleez respond by comment or on your actual blog.
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