Wednesday, January 30, 2008

i can't think of a title

it's wednesday...................................................... (in a dreary, monotonous voice) two days until saturday! and then two days until monday... then five till saturday again. yes, good job kayla, you know the days of the week!!!! i am actually freakishly hyper... maybe it wore off because i am being really dreary and sarcastic now... at least on here. anyway i am not quite sure what to write about... hey! i used to know exactly what to write until carrotop said she didn't know what to write! it's all your fault! JK. i guess i will just do a random exerpt.

The diner was one of those old fifties type ones that i love, though i wondered why there was nobody there. The walls were turquoise and there was the front half of a cadillac convertible sticking out of one of them. At the bar there were peach colored stools accented with metal stripes on the sides. The familiar scent of grilling burgers wafted its way to my nose. Tall glasses of malts and shakes sat abandoned on the counter. Suddenly the ground shook with a deafening rumble. A cascade of screams echoed outside and i ran to the window to see what was going on. The malts crashed to the floor and shattered. A few shards of glass hit my ankle and i yelled in pain. My ankles were scattered with bloody cuts, and the floor was a mess of glass and multicolored mush. Then the ceiling started to vibrate. Afraid it was going to fall, i ran under a table and crouched there, waiting. I said a quick prayer and squeezed my eyes shut, awaiting the smash. My heart pounded loudly in my chest and my sweaty hands shook. dust from outside floated in, and soon i was a mess of blood, dust and sweat. suddenly the ceiling crashed.

Friday, January 25, 2008

yay!!!!! and also no!!!!!

IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry i missed it last week. i got shots (well, a shot) today and it was pretty cool. not. it didn't actually hurt that much though. i am happy that it is friday. duh. although getting shots on a friday afternoon is sooooo great. not. 2night i am having a typical friday that you would think aobut in like a movie or something (and i mean friday night, not day): pizza and a movie (pirates of the carribean: at world's end) i am excited because someone besides jenjeanne actyually found my blog. she is carrotop. (or he? somehow i am pretty sure you are a she) go to her blog: www.carrotop2710.blogspot.com. and go to jenjeanne's: www.sweetooth2710.blogspot.com know what's weird? they both end in 2710 and they have no idea who they are. at least i think. maybe carrotop goes to my school and i don't even know it, although unless you are lying because it's the internet and you can, i don't think there are any purple haired people in my grade, or my school. i have no list for you today... never mind, yes i do: pizza toppings (heard of and unheard of)
  • pepperoni
  • sausage
  • pinapple
  • canadian bacon (aka ham)
  • turkey
  • chicken
  • ground beef
  • scrambled eggs
  • cut up hot dogs
  • ice cream- JK
  • on a cookie pizza, candy!!!!!! and frosting
  • on a fruit pizza: berries, apples, mangos, kiwis, peaches, plums, etc
  • cheese
  • fresh tomatoes
  • mozzarella

ok i probably missed some but i have to go and EAT my pizza now so bye. and please comment!!!

Monday, January 21, 2008

Interesting Things

About the animal testing poll... unless you know a ton about animal testing, you should probably be neutral about the subject. Reseaching stuff about it really helps you to take a side. Even though we just did a project on it in Language Arts, I STILL do't know enough about it to take a side. Here are a few sites you can go to to help you understand more about it (or you can just google stuff about animal testing):

OK, now sonme other random things... SNOW!!!!!!! maybe it will snow so much that we won't have school tomorrow... i especially don't want to go since the ski trip is cancelled... the snow would have made it easier to ski, but NO, it's too COLD. jenjeanne you are probably saying that it will NEVER be a snow day because you always say that but almost every year we get snow days in january, february, and sometimes even march. so there!!!! that would be so cool to have a three day week!!! i love waking up on a snow day and watching the news, and then you are wringing your sweaty hands and hoping... hoping... then you watch for the C's and finally... your school!!!! and you jump for joy and wake up your sister and she hits you but then she hugs you because she is so happy that it is a snow day and so are you and then you go outside and play in the glorious life-saving snow until you realize that you are still in your PJ's and you rush inside because it is so cold and then you eat breakfast because you actually have time since there is NO SCHOOL and then your friends call and you go to their house and party like it's your birthday only it's not but pretty close- IT'S A SNOW DAY!!!!!!!!! i seriously hope that it's gonna be a snow day tomorrow becuase based on what i jsut wrote if it isn't i am going to be VERY disappointed. and wow that was a long sentence before. oh yeah, i almost forgot- a list of AWESOME songs:

  • girlfriend
  • I can do better
  • runaway
  • the best damn thing
  • when you're gone
  • everything back but you
  • hot
  • innocence
  • i don't have to try
  • one of those girls
  • contagious
  • keep holding on (all by avril lavigne)
  • breakaway
  • since u been gone
  • behind these hazel eyes
  • because of you
  • gone
  • addicted
  • where is your heart
  • walk away
  • you found me
  • hear me
  • i hate myself for losing you
  • beautiful disaster (all by kelly clarkson)
  • piece of me (britney spears)
  • see you again (miley cyrus)
  • teardrops on my guitar
  • our song (both by taylor swift)
  • stand in the rain (superchick)
  • i don't wanna be in love (good charlotte)
  • the great escape (boys like girls)
  • when september ends (green day)
  • low (flo rida- have you ever noticed that flo rida put together is florida?)
  • crank that (need i really say? in case you are dumb i will tell you- soulja boy)
  • no one (alicia keys)
  • misery business (paramore)

there are like hundreds of other good songs and obviously i cna't list them all so whatever. also, these songs are not in order by how much i like them. they are all just in order of when i thought of them and they are all super super good. anyway, bye now please comment.

ps- if it is a snow day tomorrow i will post.

Friday, January 11, 2008

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this week went by fast. i am so happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am myself again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the insane freako alien has not taken me over any longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!! i can laugh hysterically again!!!!!!!!!! i am cured!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow. that's a lot of exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love to laugh! ok, enough of my happiness (well, enough of me blabbering about it anyway) sigh at the end of laughing now (if you know what i am talking about) ok, g2g


ps go to www.games2girls.com it's awesome!!!

Tuesday, January 8, 2008

Me Drooling (and some other things)

I am home sick right now and I was just watch MTV Cribs and this one guy from Nickelback has THE most AWESOME house EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (this would be me drooling) he has a giant shower, an indoor pool with a hot tub and steam shower, an outdoor pool with a bar and the bar seats are in the pool (also, the pool has two levels and the second level has a window underwater for the 1st level to see from the bar). He has literally like thirty fourwheelers/snowmobiles/jetskis/whatever other things like that you can imagine, his OWN STUDIO, a pool table and bar, and a TON of other really cool stuff. sometimes i think the reason they even HAVE that show is to make people like me cry. seriously. my house looks like a shack compared to his!!!!! also, this other guy who i forgot has a home theater with a giant screen and six leather reclining chairs. (he has a bunch of other stuff too, but not as cool as the theater)

Anyway, i have a list of awesome books that you must read caz they are so good

~The Truecolors series (especially Fool's Gold, Harsh Pink, Faded Denim, and Moon White)
~Stargirl
~The Princess Diaries series
~The Clique series
~The HARRY POTTER series (i am obsessed. harry potter is the BEST)
~Bass Ackwards and Belly Up (this title may be weird, but this book is really, really, really good)
~The Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants, The Second Summer of the Sisterhood, Girls in Pants, and Forever in Blue (this is a super good series too! it's kind of like Bass Ackwards and Belly Up only differentish)
There are tons more but I can't remember all of them at the moment, so maybe more later. Right now here is a list of great movies you should see (some are younger, some are older (as in age-level), but all are good)

  • Live Free or Die Hard (SO AWESOME!!!)
  • harry potter series (of course)
  • shrek the third
  • Sidney White
  • Eragon
  • The Poseidon Adventure (both the new and the old)
  • The Titanic (you've probably already seen it but if you haven't you should it is really good!)
  • Lost in Space
  • Mulan (i don't care if it is babyish this movie is AWESOME!!!!! only they ruined it with the 2nd one caz that one is so stupid!!!)
  • King Arthur (very good)
  • The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe (only if you see it too many times you start to hate it)

like before there are more but i just can't remember all of them so maybe more later. anyway, the iCarly theme song is in my head so i am going to write down the lyrics (sorry if some of them are wrong)

I know, I see, somehow the world will change for me. and be so wonderful. live life, breathe air. i know somehow we're gonna get there. and feel so wonderful. it's all for real. i'm tellin you just how i feel. so wake up the memories (members?) of my nation. it's your time to be. there's no chance unless you take one. it's your time to see the brighter side of every situation. some things are meant to be so gimme your best and leave the rest to me. leave it all to me. leave it all to me. just leave it all to me.

i love iCarly!!! it's such a cool show!!! anyway, this post is too long now so please comment and bye!!!

Sunday, January 6, 2008

Friday, January 4, 2008

guess what day it is???

IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i am especially happy beacause one thing i hate is coming back to school after a break!!! And i am SO tired and my hand hurts and i feel a little sick (which is stupid because i wanted to get sick today, but in the MORNING, so i didn't have to go to school today, but no, i am going to be sick for the weekend, instead. that's what i get!!!) but the zoey 101 movie is on tonight, the one where she might leave (even thought i know it's so obvious why, because jamie lynn spears is pregnant!!! so obviously she has to leave), and it is on at 7 and 8 (i have 2 nick channels), and so if i watch it at either time, i will still be able to watch fashionably late (this awesome show by stacy london, a cohost of What Not To Wear, a show i also love, and it is sooooooo cool i like when she goes place to see how they make stuff or whatever. and last time she made ginormous (why doesn't anybody say egantic?) cookies and it was sweet. anyway, the show is on on fridays at nine.)!!!!!

i am proud to say that i did EVERY SINGLE one of the things that were on the list (even covering my face in something (chocolate sauce), and running across the yard and back barefoot!!! except a) i didn't go around the block in shorts, a tshirt, and flip flops because that was optional anyway and my dad said i couldn't, and b) i drank sparkling juice instead of a sip of wine. oh well, that's ok, because i didn't HAVE to do any of those things anyway. and those things are very self-finding type find your inner self and such (yes that sounds stupid but i is very true. i swear.)

anyway bye!!!

Monday, December 31, 2007

list continued

Last Day of the Year Things To Do

~stay friends (submitted by jenjeanne but it shouldn't be hard to do for a day)
~run across the yard and back barefoot
~for 1 minute, write down the first thing that comes to your head and the next and the next etc
~hug your sibling(s)
~eat something that looks gross (but is actually a food)
~type a story that is EXACTLY 500 words long (doing that is not actually that hard)
~drink a full glass of plain lemon juice
~cover your face in something (shampoo, snow, ketchup,paint, glue, etc)

~draw a crazy picture

~call a random person that you don't usually call

~pick up a pen and just start writing

~ditto only drawing (can be done instead of "draw a crazy picture" or vice versa)

~blast your radio/iPod dock/CD player/jukebox (JK) and dance freakishly

~scream your name as loud as you can

~run up and down the stairs for 5 minutes straight

~walk around the block in a t-shirt, shorts, and flip-flops (this is optional but you get extra points for doing it (not literal points, i just mean that you feel better inside))

~throw some confetti

~if you are allowed to, have a sip of wine at midnight

UNLESS OTHERWISE NOTED, YOU MUST DO ALL OF THE THINGS ON THIS LIST (unless you're some random person reading this. but i am talking about jenjeanne and megabomb and me)

Sunday, December 30, 2007

list

Last Day of the Year Things To Do

  • stay friends (submitted by jenjeanne but it shouldn't be hard to do for a day)
  • run across the yard and back barefoot
  • for 1 minute, write down the first thing that comes to your head and the next and the next etc
  • hug your sibling(s)
  • eat something that looks gross (but is actually a food)
  • type a story that is EXACTLY 500 words long (that is not actually that hard)
  • drink a full glass of plain lemon juice
  • cover your face in something (shampoo, snow, ketchup,paint, glue, etc)

continued tomorrow

ice cream

i am eating vanilla ice cream right now... i haven't had it in soooo long... and i forgot how wonderfully deliciously smoothly sweetly FABULOUS it is. i have decided to write a poem about ice cream... or else maybe an ode. or both. anyway, i'm feeling really weird today. you may have noticed.


Ode To Vanilla Ice Cream

Oh, so sweet and creamy
Cold and soft
Good on a hot summer's day
or a frigid winter morning.
Vanilla ice cream
eat it in a bowl
or straight from the carton
Oh, vanilla ice cream.


ok, that was WEIRD. please comment. bye now.

Wednesday, December 26, 2007

BORED!!!

sorry; this post will be short like usual these days... but i am SO BORED!!!!!!!! i mean, you'd think that after xmas i wouldn't be bored at all, since i got a bunch of stuff (including a digital camera!!!!). but, no, I am bored out of my mind. there is actually a ton of stuff to do, but a) it requires more than one person, b) i've already done it, or c) i don't feel like doing it. have you ever felt like that? of course you have. anyway, gtg now, sorry for the short post again; i will try to write more next time. bye!!!

Monday, December 24, 2007

Merry Christmas Eve Day!

Hey yall it's xmas eve day! anyway i am exerpting now. starting with the last sentence of the last exerpt.

She looked quizzically at him for a moment, then answered, "Destroy it."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Troi sat alone on the seat of the train. Bria and Horstt stood up and came over to him.
"Hey," he mumbled. He pushed his ear-length, dusty blond hair out of his green eyes. "What's up?" Troi motioned for his friends to sit down.
"Nothing,"!" Horstt sad, looking out the window. "We're there!"
The train jerked to a heavy stop. Troi and his friends stood up and exited the train.
Before the was a lush green land flooded with light. A blanket of trees stretched across a wide expanse of the land. Behind the forest was a glittering turquoise sea, spreading out across the blue horizon until its edges kissed the bright sky. A golden sun shon above, and there was not a cloud in sight. This was Troi's paradise.




The End of the exerpt. sorry it is kinda short but i'm busy

Sunday, December 23, 2007

hey yall

Hi everybody. jenjeanne is over right now she said that i should say hey yams and yesterday i had sweet yams and they were pretty good. and even though jenjeanne is saying that yams are bad for my cholesteral or peoples cholesterol or whatever, i've heard that they are supposed to be really really good for you. or maybe that's sweet potatoes. I LOVE SWEET POTATOES!!!!!! especially with brown sugar and pecans on top. anyway, megabomb is over too and we are being insane laughing freaks like we usually are. but that is just us. jenjeanne is messing with her cell phone and she is worrying if she will be charged for something or other. I WANT A CELL PHONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! megabomb, being the meanie that she is, says jenjeanne should blame the charging on the phone on me but jenjeanne says that her mom is not that stupid. (but jenjeanne is!!) (just kidding!!!) I really want to see national treasure. please comment on it and rate it out of 5 (if you are stupid then i will say that 1 is low and 5 is high. but you're not that stupid. right?) anyway. Merry Christmas!!!


ps that reminds me... please vote on your holiday.

Friday, December 21, 2007

It is I!!!

ok, i realize that that title is a little weird, but oh well. anyway, i was minding my own business, looking at other blogs, when what should i come across but 3- yes, THREE!- supposedly "inspirational" blogs. and ok, i guess they were a little inspiring, but i mean seriously, when i want inspiration, I want it now!!! so, i have decided to comppose a list of inspiring things/songs/books/artworks, etc.

ok, first of all, the word inspire is pretty inspiring. i mean, come on- inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire inspire (ok, i guess if i rub it in your face so much it loses it's touch, but you know what i mean)

breakaway by kelly clarkson
roses with rain on the petals
the fresh smell after it rains
an intricate spiderweb

this list will be continued later like tomorrow or something!!!

yayayayayayayayay!!!!!!!!

IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (for the third week in a row- oh wait that was a stupid thing to say, because next week it will be friday day for the fourth week in a row, and then the fifth, and so on. bu i'm always on the computer on friday afternoon. right now i am at jenjeanne's house.) anyway, I only came on here to change the poll, until I realized that it was friday and i had to say that IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh yeah, jenjeanne said that there's no school until next year!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (2008 if you're not smart enough to figure out that that's what i mean by "next year") so bye now!


ps Merry Christmas!!!

pps And a Happy New Year!!!!

Wednesday, December 19, 2007

I am bored

I went to the parade. it wasn't THAT cold, but whatever. by the way, gee, THANKS FOR VOTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not. anyway, i don't have much to write....... other than the usual random babbling... BTW, i ended up NOT going to the dumb movie... whatever gtg

Friday, December 14, 2007

happy!!!

again, IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am happy. tomorrow I am going to a movie with hayley, jackie, and megabomb. (sorry jenjeanne but i don't think you even like jackie that much, do you?) and then on sunday I am going XMAS SHOPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have to spend like a ton of money though because I have too many friends. In language arts (yes, for real this time) we are supposed to do a reflection on this activity that we did in class about integrity. it should be half fun half not so fun. tonight we are going downtown to see the parade and the Nutcracker show. It is ssssssssssoooooooo dumb because I am going to freeze my butt off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am trying to convince my mom to let us stand in a skyway but she thinks that it will be too packed. Well, if it is packed then you are warmer, aren't you???????????????? What happens if it is too cold? she doesn't seem to care about that, does she? And she won't even let me stay home. She says if I don't go and we all have to stay home like last year, I won't be able to go to the movie tomorrow! but i said just let me stay home alone!!! BUT SHE WON'T LET ME!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO BE MISERABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO FREEZE!!!!!!! it's like we haven't see the parade like ten times!!!! It hasn't changed so why do we have to go again? why do I have to go again??? it's like she WANTS to torture me!!! I swear, that woman sometimes...

Monday, December 10, 2007

weird things

My friend Megabomb is talking weird randomness... sounds like someone I know... ME!!!! Now she is talking about a freaky thing where you talk to dead people. I don't feel like exerpting today... once again, sorry devoted readers (where am I getting this hopeless idea that people are obsessed with my writing?) I am secretly on the computer right now... my mom is outside and whenever she comes in I pretend to look up language arts homework... I am sssssssssssssoooooo sneaky!!! OK, I gotta go now because I don't feel like typing anymore... it hard on the floor (I am on the floor because it is harder for my mom to see me from the doorway here and by the time she gets upstairs to see me I will be able to bring up the "language arts research") Anyway... bye now.

Saturday, December 8, 2007

and now it is saturday

i am not going to do an exerpt today since i did yesterday, so my faithful readers will be disappointed (whatever). anyway, i am going to my friend's house right now so i must leave you all hanging ( i am so sure). whatever. you don't have to comment on this post if you don't want to... i don't care. oh, BTW, IT'S SATURDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and so on and so forth like the last post.

Friday, December 7, 2007

and so on and so forth

IT'S FRIDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (for the time being) i'm free!!!!! (well, at least until Monday, when i'll have to drag my poor self out of bed ssssssssssooooooooooooooooo early and trudged tiredly into the freezing cold, where i will sit and wait to reach my dreaded destination. but let's not think about that now.) anyway, despite my newfound period of freedom, i will stick to my promise of writing more, so as not to disappoint all you who are reading my fabulous story (yah right!)

god, what is with me??? i am writing all weird and formal and such!!! and dramatic!!!!!!! well, i suppose (what's up with that?) that i talk like this; all dramatic and overeggerative and all, but still, i mean i NEVER write like this!!! well, whatever. so, i will start with the last sentence of the most recent exerpt:

A bolt of electricity shot from the Queen's blackened fingertips, and the man crumpled to the floor, lifeless.
"Bloka!" the Queen called. A frail-looking man scurried into the room. His eyes flickered nervously to the corpse on the ground, but then he answered his Queen dutifully,
"What is it, Queen Elissa?" He tried his luck, smiling meekly at her, but his grin faded as it met her cold stare.
"Dispose of the vermin. You may do it as you wish, but I never want to hear of him again."
Bloka nodded and bent to pick up the body. His glance landed on the thin chain around Saar's neck that matched his own.
"His binding...?" he asked the Queen.
She looked quizzically at him, the answered, "Destroy it."


PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know that jenjeanne can't possibly be the only person in the WORLD who has read this, so unless you have no idea what this means (in which case you couldn't have read that anyway, which is like those bumper stickers that say "Honk if you're illiterate."), COMMENT OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (of course it's not like i can actually DO anything to you on account of a bunch of reasons, but whatever!!!)

Thursday, November 29, 2007

response and other stuff

thanx for your comment, kylie/jenjeanne2710!!! BTW, most of my writing, especially stuff that isn't from this year is actually quite bad... at least compared to stuff i write now... i mean, it is SO much better than stuff from last year!!! i wish more people would comment... that means you if you are reading this right now!!!! that exerpt was the beginning of the story... i will write the next thing after that, but i will start with the last sentence of the other exerpt

She ran quickly and silently away, following the twisting road into the horizon and out of sight.
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"Do you have the Pendant?" a chilling voice said. A hooded figure sat in a black throne. Before her knelt a man, shaking with fear. "No, Your Majesty," the man replied. He raised his head slightly as if to make eye contact, then quickly lowered it again.
Now the woman shook with icy rage.
"Why?" the Queen demanded. She pounded her clenched fist on the arm of the chair.
"There were certain... difficulties... A powerful king of a faraway kingdom is in posession of it. It proved near impossible to take is from him."
The Queen smiled. "And who might this regal king be?" She smiled wider, so wide that her lips disappeared and her eyes flashed.
"King Roiter of Shargesty," the man answered.
"You have failed me, Saar, and thus you are useless to me.
The man's face contorted into a wrinkle of confusion and fear. The Queen raised her hand, and the man lifted his arm as if to shield his face, but it was in vain. A blot of blue electricity shot from the Queen's blackened fingertips, and the man crumpled to the floor, lifeless.



The End of the exerpt




I will write the next part in the mext post... I don't know when that will be, though. Please comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuesday, November 27, 2007

I love blogs!!!

I love to read blogs and make blogs and post comments on blogs and everything!!! It is SOOO fun... yes i know i have an obsession but oh well!!!!! Ok, i am going to write an excerpt from a story/book that i am writing. Please post a comment about it.


A girl, about twelve, sat alone in a dark corner. Her dark chesnut hair hung in her face. She was staring into the distance, a lost look in her emerald green eyes. A look of hopelessness, of fear. The girl stood. She was wearing white knee-length shorts and a green tank top.

The girl uttered a single, inaudible word. Her voice was hoarse and raspy, and she sounded desperate. Tears glistened in her eyes, quivering in place before cascading down her face. She ran quickly and silently away, following the twisting road into the horizon and out of sight.


The End (of the exerpt)